You've gotten much better at descriptions. I could almost smell the smoke from the blacksmith and taste the cordial. I'm glad to see that you're still writing.
I had a computer crash, sot otok a while to get back up. This story is almost ready to be sent to the printer for the first proof copy. The version on SS is not quite the most up to date.
You've gotten much better at descriptions. I could almost smell the smoke from the blacksmith and taste the cordial. I'm glad to see that you're still writing.
I had a computer crash, sot otok a while to get back up. This story is almost ready to be sent to the printer for the first proof copy. The version on SS is not quite the most up to date.